Amazing. Lol. I loved this!

Thank you for writing this! Amazing is just that, amazing. I wish more authors would write about how that majority of women look, not make the female characters really skinny.

Amazing :)) *grins*

AMAZING! Loved it, every moment of it! Especially the end :-)

I loved it! Being a 'plus sized' girl myself, this was well written and respectful... thanks for sharing!

This was TRUELY amazing!

Awwwwww. OMG. I love this story so much! I cant even tell u how much i liked it.. Youre an amazing writer. Keep it up! :))

Wow - you've already used the best word to describe this O/S - AMAZING!

Wow - just sexy as hell! Your writing of such a delicate subject in our society today was perfect. We have too many young women that are plus size and need to feel just the way your Bella does. And your Edward was just simply to die for - slightly shy, somewhat hesitant but as we say in the south "Pert near perfect."

I'm gonna quote my daddy here - don't snort - but he always said that he'd rather crawl on a sack of cotton than a bag of bones any day! He was perfect. I never knew exactly what he meant until I was older - and yes, I'm plus-sized myself.

I would love to see you go back and make this a full-fledged fic. I know it would be amazing.

Loved your story, loved your writing. Thank you for taking your time to write for our awesome fandom.

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hi sweety, i can't tell u how much i enjoyed and loved it all... plz continue if u can... some outtakes maybe.. bec this really felt amazing... loved it very much...

Loved this!

Great job. As a full figured gal I really identified with this story...okay most of it.

Awww I loved this one-shot...u really addressed real problems and at the same time made a girl who really need her dreams to come true...if you had made this a full story I would have totally read all of it;) btw what's ur betas ff...I will totally check out her work...so cute how she gave you baby clothes with helicopters to remind u of motu...it is an awesome story...just as always I love your work and I'm gonna check out more of it:)

oh my fucking god! this story is the sexist, most fantasy-fulfilling, most squirm-in-my-seat, jaw-droppingly beautiful thing I have ever read! I've been a fatty all my life. I dreamed of a moment like this and it never happened for me...I love you and I love your gorgeous story! Thank you for you beautiful words!

I Loved it! I really love that you did a "Plus Sized" Bella aswell! Even though I don't think that Size 12 is plus size! Lol

Awesome story!