Great story so far!

I must say, I'm impressed. Most of the fan fiction I've read so far has been nothing short of abominable. But you managed to accurately capture the tone, the characterisation, the dialogue. The only criticism I might make is that you need to watch your grammar and wording in places. Other than that, I liked it- and I'm very hard to please.

PLZ UPDATE REALLY FAST GREAT BRILLANT EXCELLENT PLZ!

This is such a great story you've written. I think that Stifler should be portrayed as a lot less sensitive, but other than that, this is the best AP story I've read so far. Awesome work, and I'll check for updates soon.

I like this story! keep it up and update!

Love the story! I hope you post a new chapter as soon as possible! Keep up the good work.

This is an awesome story! I really like how your writing the characters! I love that Stifler is getting some love! He's the best character of all the movies! I just saw American Wedding & he stole the movie, he was the best part of the movie! If you could email me when you update, that would be great! Thanks! Keep up the good work!

it's about time Stiffler fell in love! jeez! Oh but the 3rd movie is coming out and your story reminded me of this next one. I can't wait to see it, cuz I love Stiffler! Anyway, great story. I can't believe you got their personalities down so well. One comment is I think Stiffler's mom was totally off. But maybe you made her like that on purpose. Have no idea. Anyway good job.

Hey! I really like this story. It really showed the nicer side of Stifler and showed that when he wants to be...he can be a great guy...not just a pathetic jerk. Thanks for writing this story. You are a good writer and you can keep people hooked to a story. I loved the American Pie movies and I really like this American Pie Story. It's so funny!

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Hey Purple Pepsi

I read ur story and i just gotta say god damn u must be a big fan of the trilogy like me. It sounds just like somehting that would happen with Jim falling ova his words and the wise cracking stiffler putting his foot in his mouth. I hoep to read many more American Pie stories from u because as beinig a writter my self u really now how to capture the characters attributes.

Hm...It's pretty good, OK...KEEP WRITING!

I've seen the first 2 American Pies and I thought they were pretty good and so ur fan fic but I think u need to desribe Jessica more. cool story update soon.

omg that was a great story! i loved it but u need to make a 4th chapter:( son please:) i want to know wat will happen! so please write a 4th chapter soon! i loved it great job

Hey this is pretty cool (American Pie is like one of my all-time fave movies!) and I hope you continue it soon!

Thank the Lord! You actually updated. I was beginning to give up on you.

Another great chapter, as usual.

Keep up the good work!