Love it! Very nice little story. :)

This is the most...AWESOME THING I'VE EVER READ! THIS IS SO COOL!

Amazingly well written. I loved every minute of it. Never forget this talent!

very cool and interesting. keep writing more. (please)

Wow! That was . . . interesting. Not exactly my perception of the way things went, but Core didn't really give us much to go on as to her escape from the tomb. I like how you stuck with the information in the games instead of the movie. You know a LOT about Egyptian mythology! If you could, please look over a few of my stories and give me your opinion, though they pale dreadfully in comparison.

Incidentally, Tim is one of the judges in this year's competition ...

I think I'm gonna cry... I LOVE YOUR WORK AAARGH YOU HAVE TO WRITE SOME MORE! Your conclusion was just AMAZING. ! Sorry, that's just something we do here. anyways WRITE WRITE WRITE right now Im forcing the Lost Storehouse down the throats of my friends, the Tolkiens. : )