I know I'm probably a bit late to the party, but this one was off to a really good start, so I added an alert and thought I'd leave you a note :) I know one can't rush creativity/inspiration or anything, and that you probably are busy, but I thought I'd leave a message all the same. I'd love to see more of the way "new guy" sees Team Mustang, and the way his little "crush" will be dealt with ;) Anyway. If you update this, I'd love it, but I won't hate you if you don't or anything ;)

M

This was really good! I can't wait to see what happens next! Update Soon please! :3

I'm patiently waiting for the sparks! :D A little short, but better than nothing! And an omake! yaay \o/

Haha poor new guy. He's lucky Roy's asleep.

I love it so far. Please update soon.

I'm looking forward to more :)

Your story's very interesting! I really wanna know what you're planning. Keep going! I'm here to read it! :3

Have you considered finding a beta reader? I like your story premise, and your imagery and dialogue are quite good. Your writing is plagued by typos and awkward syntax, though, and a beta reader might help.

I am in love with this. I am thrilled to see more1

This is so lovely. I read the first chapter and thought it was just a one-shot, but I am thrilled you're making this a chapter story. I'm really excited to see where you're going with this! Please update soon!

This is interesting to say the least (in a good way)

I like how you captured their characters very well. Nicely done, can't wait for an update!

Why this only has one review? I don't know, so many people skip over good fics!

I love this,'you should continue :D