Cute

Love the story, Hope you'll update the story... ASAP!

I can't say I understood most of this, because I don't know half of the characters but I enjoyed it. No typos I can see though one word choice made me falter:

"Teddy had possessed", I would have used 'inherited' because you mentioned Remus and Tonks. If you had said 'Teddy possessed both werewolf and metamorphamagus abilities' then it would have made more sense. Grammatically correct either way, just makes more sense in context with 'inherited'.

There seems to be a lot of world building left unsaid, are you filling these gaps in later, or leaving it to the imagination of the reader?

*WingsOfFate*

Daww sooo cute! I love it hun!

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haha... That was classic. Your writing has gotten better. I can now work out who is thinking what. I have to say when you told me of this idea I most certiantly did not imagine Harry in black leather pants with a black open shirt and a witches hat oh and we can't forget the black matching stilettos.

Oh just to give you a heads up my story for you will be about the martial arts tornement. Harry will meet the Z Gang.

Yay for Teddy! I like it when he's making an appearance It was well written as well and I can totally see Gohan training his, well adopted almost son? Fighting seems to be a necessity when being friends/lovers/anything with this group of people.

I'm not sure if a review for your other drabble is of much help, I didn't even understand half of what happened, because I've never watched/read Vampire Hunter D, I don't even know the characters or what the series is about, sorry.

this was cute!