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nolrai
2009-05-18 . chapter 1
ke ke ke ke
BlazeStryker
2008-07-24 . chapter 6
Goldie AND Rally? Ye gods.

By the way, if you ever wondered why Sonoda "abandoned" Riding Bean for Gunsmith Cats.. he didn't.

Gunsmith Cats is the PREQUEL.
Blackdex
2007-05-10 . chapter 6
That’s just not right man, that’s just not right. Good work though. Ciao
Thrythlind
2007-01-21 . chapter 1
I've heard in places that Rally is supposed to be ethnically Indian (as in the sub-continent), just raised by a Caucasian American (her father, whose name she took). Either her mother was Indian, or she's adopted. Plus, she's often drawn with a dark shade of brown to back that up.
velvetkit
2007-01-21 . chapter 6
This was one of the most entertaining fics I've read to date. Thrythlind, where do you come up with all these wonderful ideas? ^_^

You should have put full names (and possibly a list of what series) for the "List of the Saotomes". I recognize the Tenchi cast and the Ranma cast, and Urd, but that's all. Rally isn't Rally Vincent from Gunsmith Cats, I'm guessing--she didn't have dark skin.

I didn't realize until the "cliches this pokes fun at" part at the end that this was supposed to be just a big spoof. The story was that good. ^_^
Janneia
2006-07-02 . chapter 6
Wow... I absolutely /LOVED/ this story - I found it in the RAAC archives and then went here because the RAAC stored file lacked the final chapter :( - and this just blew me away! *adds to Favourites*

Good stuff, keep it up!!

"Damian", I presume equates to "Darien" (SM)? His Japanese name is Mamoru.
Tuisto
2006-05-28 . chapter 6
GREAT STORY! It is a lemon? or is it a Comedy?
WHO CARES! It's funny as hell and sexy wrong (in the good way) at the same time! The writing is great, really alive.
Though, the list of Saotomes's, Herb? Kasumi? Mouse? Rei (as in Rei Ayenami?)! Sasami? and lastly TOFU! THAT's ALL JUST SO WORNG! BUwhahahahahahahaha!
Great story, I give it a, AA++
Thanks!
Ace A
2004-05-17 . chapter 6
Great story. And bringing in the Yuka, Sayuri, Hiroshi and Daisuke at the end was the icng on the cake. :)
Fave mo: The Kiss of Marriage being administered and consummated simultaneously. LOL
dogbertcarroll
2003-08-21 . chapter 5
How exactly did Nabiki end up called?

"I own the moon," Kodachi said, not joking at all.
Isn't Usagi going to be ** at that? *grin*

"That," Cologne said, highly embarrassed. "Is the first time I've seen the Kiss of Marriage come with its own consummation."
LOL!

"I'm just wondering when I get to be the guy," Ranma said testily.

"Strip poker tournament," Akane said. "Ranma lost...several times."

This has to be one of the funniest fics I have read in a while!
dogbertcarroll
2003-08-21 . chapter 4
I liked the reasoning abought demons viewpoints and why Mara
wouldn't accept that she could be welcomed into heaven.

Well, I'll just have to tidy up my room before she...
er...let her down easy...that's right.
Hehehe.

"This is my new fiancée?" Ranma asked. "An oompa-lumpa?"
LOL!

"We've been around Ranma too long," Ukyou said. "That actually sounds
plausible."
I love this fic.
dogbertcarroll
2003-08-21 . chapter 3
"I know, okay? I'm not THAT stupid."
LOL. I was almost sure he was.

I like the explanation for the demons
and the half demons.

Wow. Everyone is getting a rather quick sex change in this story!
dogbertcarroll
2003-08-21 . chapter 2
*Warning: contrived coincidences will appear at almost random*
Doesn't that always happen around Ranma?

"How repressed and stubborn could she possibly be?"
Famous last words when dealing with a certain mallet
wielding Tendo! I loved all the fantasy scenes she
went through.

~Must get away and beat head clear of that image.~
Hehehe.

"She was just realizing she probably should have checked over the prospective Valkyrie's letter"
LOL!

Urd was really beginning to want to hurt most of the
parents of her intendeds.
Most people just settle for hurting Genma.
dogbertcarroll
2003-08-21 . chapter 1
"Love octagon from hell."
Actually when you add in a crossover
the correct term is "Love Fractal
from hell" *grin*

"How do that while you feeling up Shampoo?" Shampoo asked dryly.
I love Urd. It's nice to see a character with her priorities
in order. Feel up Shampoo first, deal with demons second.

Great start.
libhranan
2002-07-30 . chapter 4
oh...my... god! this is so funny in such a wierd way that i'm laughing too hard to breathe. keep up this good work!
Final-Fan
2002-05-05 . chapter 5
This just kept getting better and better...then the fic ended, but hey, they all have to sometime.

Definitive proof that even a parody can have its own intrinsic worth as a story. (Not that I think it's the only example.)
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