cool chapter so loki has her power back? and when are we going to know what the marks mean on loki neck?update soon

awww .WILL. My goodness if he and Lucas were both alive and free I would be in turmoil in my room thinking about which one should I have and being all like Lucy Westerna "oh why cannot a woman marry as many men as she wants?" :D because they both make my heart race like mad. Jesus in heaven two perfect brothers good Loki is already in love with one of them because she would surely have one dillema if she met them at once :D. Ph my my this is great chapter. I admire your writing skills my friend you write sooo long chapter and sooo detialed and well described I wish i could do it like this. and my I love both of your characters it shows Will as stuck up at times but NOBLE he did not want to leave Loki while his female counterpart just cried a few tears made an exhibishion of herself and when she saw Lok is alive and there is a secret power behind the wall she just jeered at him and actually stepped over him to get it. Shows just what is more important to her. Glad glad glad Will is not so.

BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL description of Lane. I like her she is such a cute little thing...I bet that Dellix would be overprotective of her if trouble came. I would feel sorry for the one who would come in range of his sword then...because that thingy can cut cars. I loved Will here and now you gave me a lot of feature problems and dilemas because since I don't like her High-and-Mightyness Sophie C. I think that I would have difficulties taking sides in conflict between Lucas and Will! I would not know who to support...and Loki. I like that girl she rocks :D. I somehow see everyone falling in love with her. Even Faclaud and surely if Lucas had no objections to LOK in the original series he should love Loki.

Zhalia is missing but there will be Lane and Dellix coming YAY. I love those two honestly. They're such ying/yang duo :D and Will is going to discover some remaining mystery of his family-the Library and a spell to restore the journal. Yippe.

Geez, Klaus was and even bigger jerk here than he was in the show. He deserves a lot more than just getting turned to stone.
And there's Loki being Loki. I just love that girl. You're doing a gret job on her. Keep it up.

Awesome! I can't wait till the next chapter. Update soon!

and now Dante will brood over her not being there and become a little bit of pain in the neck when there is no missions, making the kids beg heavens for Zhalia's quick return. and poor Zhalia Klaus killed everything she ever cared for and forced her to live a lie and nearly kill her new family. Poor poor thing!

dum dum dum dum :D the fight comes and crazy Klaus oh the crazy oh the DRAMA! I know I've said it before but I love your descriptions and way with words...and your characters now I'm in same position as Zhalia...I don't know who to feel sorry for more and who to support. I love Will he is different than Sophie and I love Loki but I also like Zhalia and hate missunderstandings and stuff like that. I hope everything clears up soon then and that they'll be friends and there will be lots of cutness, frendship family bonds and romantic love :D.

This story is awesome! You can be sure that I'll be keeping my eyes on this one. Update soon, otherwise I'm gonna go crazy with anticipation.

Yay. The infamous Castle buahahaha :D I got a nice piece of soundtrack for it. Transylvania album by Nox Arcana :D hmmm which track to pick for that mission Lair of Vampire, Echoes from Crypt, Nocturne, Gothic Santcum or maybe..Castle Dracula hmm...very troubling. As to the chapter it's simply masterpiece. The way Zhalia feels for the team described with colours of their eyes...colours of the very window to their souls. Nice idea. Now we'll have the most heart tearing moments ahead. Somehow I hate the moment when Zhalia is fighting Sophie. I dislike misunderstandings, especially now I'll be upset by them since I like Will and I can't wait for him to start to get along with Zhalia.

awwwwwwww I love her. Actually I love all your characters :D Will, Loki, Dante, Zhalia and the others.I would love whole team if you made it :D I loved Will before but now I love him even more because he reminds me of Lucas and yep if you red my chapters and if you know my OCs usually are based of me...then you know it. Another non-real man crush of mine. Lucas Casterwill :P. So if your Casterwill boy reminds me of him them well...he is liked:D and Loki fits with him. With Will I mean. They're so sweet and oh. I love the chapter. Love Dante more then ever. Cant' wait for your description of his feelings when he sees Zhalia on the train, on the roof and of course his mixed feelings about her leaving because I am sure he wasn't feeling so understanding about it. He surely wanted her to stay and wanted to stop her only let her go because he didn't want to force her, and wanted her to make her own decisions because he knew she needs her time. Understanding in that way sure but he wasn't happy. That goes without saying I think. So I am waiting for new chapters and for romance. suprisingly on both sides. both teen couple and adult couple.

wow :D battle for Zhalia's heart. Nice ending for chapter battle between father and lover. That sure is gonna be interesting. Poor Will as much as I was with Zhalia when she snapped at Sophie I was feeling sorry for Will because he at least has doubts from beginning :P and not just because elder brother didn't agree to a hopeless battle and huge life lost. Anyway the chapter was great I am always taken aback with admiration and your smooth ways of describing things. You have a way with words.

Same here I scream every time I see a spider. Good job Loki for it freaking out. She's braver then me. Awesome chapter, can't wait for the next one.

wow. the last sentence puts chills down my spine and althought I don't fear them I don't like spiders either...;? love Dante and Loki and Will *sigh* he turns out so alright. reminds me as I said of Sophie's brother though less experienced and tormented and aloof but still . :D can't wait for more romance betweeen and Miss Loki Lambert also awaiting more of Dante and Zhalia. Poor woman she's going through hell here...

Other than this chapter being awesome and descriptive as hell, I am mainly excited about EPISODE 17. YES YES YES. I can't wait to see how you write the Zhalia-climax of season 1. :DDD That sounded wrong. Oh well.

YES YES UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE.