Wow! I hope you get a beta soon, your english is a off and so is the flow of the story, it's very choppy. I think if you find a beta they could help you write clearer and the characters would have more emotion and feel like your there. The connection is missing. However, this story could have potential, aww well! Good luck!

wow it is getting good thanks hope you up date when you can thanks

wow that is what parents and people in charge do when you get in trouble

wow that was nice of Severus to let him make it up and he did earn that spanking too

wow poor Harry he will be getting his first spanking by Severus soon thanks

wow Harry will learn to do as he is told and people do care about him thanks

great work thanks

thank you it is a good one

thanks loving it keep up the great work

it is a good one thanks

wow it is getting good thanks

wow it is getting good thanks

Please write more this is really interesting!

Thanks for updating! Fabulous chapter! I can't wait to see how things are going to go in the next chapter. Please update!

Nice though maybe you could separate the dialogues in a new line so it's easier to read? Update soon