Very, very good. I'm sad it hasn't been updated or gotten more reviews

plz continue this fic cause its one of the better ones ive read and the idea is brilliant

Aw! I love it! Please update! I don't understand how it hasn't gotten like 100 reviews already! I love dark fics like this! anyway update!

DB

Oh...BLOOD! Tasty! Please update this soon, if you're still among the living! It's been... about two years since you wrote this chapter. PROCRASTINATOR. Or maybe you ARE dead. Okay then, if you are indeed not dead (yet...), update or I will ensure that changes. Be afraid, be very afraid! MUAHAHAHAHAHA! Anyway, it's great so far, and very dark and bloody, very angsty. Lovely. The bit of yaoi implication was great, too... Sephy is so-o hot... er, anyway, please update! Byezels! .DERANGED KITTEN.

OOh I like it.. Don't know why, tho .. It's good. btw I have no idea what "lemon" means (in that context) so if someone could like.. e-mail me and tell me because it's driving me crazy..

Ooo, nice angsty fic. I like were its going. What is cloud's theme?

i wrote a review to this long past since but it must have been eaten. ive been wanting to hear more of this story for a long time because i just like really disturbing fics and this is one of those that caught my attention right off. if you could please write more and add something more to my messed up imagination it would be much appriciated. arigato. a loyal fan

need more. love reading about mooorrre. good plot. yummy

Ultra-sassy! I'm a cutter myself, so it's good to see it in a fanfic. There are lots of characters in VGs that would do it, but nobody ever sayd so. Good writing!

Woah, that's kinda freaky, Extrememly good though and i wanna see more PLEASE *puppydog eyes

Wow dark... Keep going please. I love Cloud. :P

I liked this very much-Nice and DARK and bloody. I do like the way you portray Cloud, too.

Looking forward to seeing more, when you do get around to it.

Ohhh! Bloody and sadistac! (I don't know how to speel that damn word!)

When is the yaoi going to come? I love SephyXCloud yaoi!

Good luck in the future!

Lauren

A very interesting portrayal of Cloud...looking forward to more.

Hey, I like this. Please keep writing it. I like the way you portray Cloud. No one seems to want to write him like this, after all this is a possability.