Oh, I'd really like to see more of this!

Went poking around on a Wheeljack hunt after reading a terrific fic starring him a few night ago, and happened to stumble upon your stuff. I must say, Jackie isn't my favorite Autobot (I don't seem to mesh well with him mentally), but I really do like how you write him. I know this fic hasn't been updated in, well, quite a while, but I was just curious if it was abandoned, or just on a back burner until further notice.

A very different plot... I like it! The chapters could be a bit longer, but I hope you update soon!

I was just imagining Ratchet all RAGEFACE here, and it was highly amusing. Highly. And also spark breaking, honestly.

Since I don't think Ratchet has money I hope he has the spark to force some respect outta the Blaster City inhabitants or he'll be joining Jack... Eagerly awaiting the next part :P

Good to see Ratchet's well on his way to helping Wheeljack, I'll be cheering for him the whole way!

Squeeeeee-ing as promised.

I wanna give Jack a hug and let him know that Ratch is coming, but you shut him away in a little cage :(

Great chapter, can really feel Jack fear and pain in it, almost don't want you to continue so that he doesn't get hurt anymore, but then he'll never get rescued either :P

GAAAAHHHH. *channels Moses* Let my Wheeljack gooooo...

Poor Jackie. No one should have to be in a place as awful as that, let alone their own personal hell.

Poor Wheeljack. Hopefully Ratchet can rescue him in time.

Sweet! I have much crazy love for Ratchet and Wheeljack, so liking this story might just have been inevitable. It is great to see some of Wheeljack's past before the war explored.

Hmmmmm,very interesting background you are creating here!But like I aid before-all of your Ratchet and Wheeljack stories rock, so please continue. :)