This was great! I loved the ending (I woulda liked more, of course, but this was by far the best way to end it)

I hope you are going to continue dont leave us hanging... I love this...

JENNIFER

This is great writing but cruel in the way it leaves me wanting so much more!

lurvely. he better have told her

That's evil! You can't just leave it there! hehe, really good story. Write more, pleeeaaasee?

That was sweet!