Your writing is filled with imagery, yet with some simplicity to it. I like the idea of Silver using his telekinesis to protect Blaze from the rain. Lovely

I must say, that was very creative!

i could use some help...

jack:*shoots pen with a fish cannon*

and thats why...

Wow...You just made me a full supporter of Silvaze. This was awesome; probably the best Silvaze story I've ever read. Thanks for writing, I love your writing style.

An interesting story...but still good.

Nice one-shot. I did have a soft spot for Blaze/Silver stories...well done!

From, Comment person

P.S. When did Silver become more powerful?

this was a nice little oneshot, I like how it was posted on my birthday. wish i knew at the time tho, that wouldve had made it a nicer one.

Beautiful :)

Their characters and personalities are matching yet in a much more mature way then SEGA presents them.

Silver's power was described amazingly and creative, I could imagine it all happening.

Simply lovely. :) This is definitely going into my favorites.

It was a nice little one-shot which I greatly enjoyed. Now I want my own telekinetic umbrella.

Wonderful, cute, and creative... I enjoyed this a lot. Especially Silver's manipulation of the rain. I'd never thought of him doing that before, but the way you described it all sounded so breathtaking. And it was a nice idea for him to create music as well. Amazing job.

SilverDawn

Ah, a cute and well written oneshot. Lovely way to start my day.

I love how you describe things. Just enough for me to visualize the scene. A lot of authors go overboard with details and end up boring me. But you don't.

I also love the whole Blaze the Princess and Silver the Commoner thing going on.

Awwwwwwwwww.. usted lo ha hecho demasiado lindo y romántico. :D