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JBubbles 10/9/10 . chapter 1
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wahhhhh that fic was just so perfect! You said that we didn't have to know abou PSOH to read this fic, but I beg to differ; even tough it's not obvious related, the love that the Count experience in this previous life you wrote to him explain his personality.

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oh my god I loved it
yllom21 9/2/09 . chapter 1
Wow. That was absolutely beautiful. The transition to Leon, and then Japan was very sudden, but besides that, it was good. Very well written, beautiful writing style, imaginative, and nicely done.
Rissika 6/27/09 . chapter 1
That's interesting and quite unique story!

I really like the doctors character!
m3ow-chan 2/17/08 . chapter 1
Wow. This was beautifully written
Lady Psychic 5/27/07 . chapter 1
Wow! That was such a beautifully written story!
een nihc 4/23/06 . chapter 1
This story just blew me away. So heart-wrenchingly beautiful. I can find no suitable words from my limited vocabs to describe my awe reading this master piece. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this story with us.
Blue 3/16/06 . chapter 1
I absolutely loved your use of haiku's in this story. Lemme tell ya, I cried like a little baby when Hikaru died in the bomb, even though I knew it was coming T_T The ending to this was perfect in my opinon and suited the plot wonderfully (I read this before Sacrifices *SMITES self for being an ebil lurker*) Off to read more _
Saraj 2/6/06 . chapter 1
Hello! This was a very good story.

I thought the plot was unique and interesting. The descriptions were wonderful. Though some of the characterizations seem a bit too exaggerated and some of the history could have shortened.
Seiii 8/26/05 . chapter 1
Gah. I would much rather leave a thoughtful con-crit review but it'll probably be some time I can get my shell-shocked synapses firing again.

So you'll have to do with this:

WOW. WOW. WOW. WOW.
RavingBabbit 6/13/05 . chapter 1
I will never read a fanfiction of this calibre.. ever again. Just one chapter and my heart forgot what it was doing. . Thank you very much for publishing this. And the research! O_O

Yeah, I'm done now.
Pyrotess 6/7/04 . chapter 1
That had to be one of the most beautiful stories I've read, fanfic and otherwise. It was interesting to see your take on D's past and his immortality. You did a wonderful job making this story, male and male it is, a beautiful romance! You should write professionaly.
A'maelamin 2/8/04 . chapter 1
I absolutly loved your story. i love how you combined poetry from The Tale of Genji. it's really tastefully done. i cried when Hikaru died, it was so sad. just wanted to send some love, so keep writing, Please!
Ravenstar692003 1/14/04 . chapter 1
I was sure that after all D had gone through for the one that he loved, that he would hav been able to keep him...it saddens me greatly that he made Leon forget what they had both in the past and present, such pain is not one either of them should ever have to endore. And so, while I liked the story greatly, in general, I was most disapointed with the ending...it would be nice if you had given them a happy ending concidering that the manga ends so sadly with their seperation any way. It would be interesting to see how things would have been had Leon remembered...and yet the one I find the most pain from is D. I have cried over and over from the pain that he must have endored to show his love, and in the end he made the ultimate sacrafice and chose to suffer alone in his grief. How sad that is, and how truely devistating it had to be for him...I truely wish that you will give both him and Leon the happiness that they deserve in the next fic of them that you do...you are an increadible writer and I enjoyed getting lost in your story, as well as the enotions that it evoked with in me...I hope to read more from you...Arigato Gozimaisu...until next time...Ja bai bai!
Ravenstar
shinya 11/3/03 . chapter 1
Never in a long time has a fic been so beautifully written as to have made me cry. First from sorrow and then from joy then utter dispair for what could have been.

Thank you for writing such a story.
Unknown 10/25/03 . chapter 1
I am truly touched. I must say that this is the most fantastically exquisite piece of literary work that I have ever had the honor of reading. I admire you for your truly exceptional and amazing talents. In all honesty, I was moved to tears. Thank you for such a beautifully written masterpiece. It was truly worthwhile to read such a tale.

Tobira wo akete soko wa eien

Tooku no yobigoe dare no koe?

Kami wo nazeru no anata wa dare?

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I open the door, and there lies eternity.

Whose voice is it, that voice calling me from afar?

Who are you, who strokes my hair?
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