Very good story. I like the sensitive nature you gave the marionette and the kindness. Shows a real talent. Keep up the good work and I look forward to seeing more of your fan fiction.

Wow...this was absolutely fantastic. Excellent work.

first off; Welcome aboard!

Alright, review time.

I know for a fact that the story ended in Saber Marionette J to X, but this is the closes thing to the real Saber Marionette J novel, though there is a hint that this one maybe influence more towards the anime itself. The story seamlessly pickup where the novel story left off, with Otaru being an elderly man and the Saber Girls most likely broken down or still functional, but barely.

It is rather emotional take for me that the Bloodberry, being the character you put the most heart on most feel out of character due to the fact she is very violent and pushy, and I almost misinterpreted that it is Cherry until a small hint were shown (red-haired, last to be awaken, etc)

This is one of a few Saber Marionette story which I would gladly read again and again. As such, this story earn a Favorite.