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just SO kawaii

i love it! haha you dont get nephy naru! nya nya!

Adorably cute, though you might want to check through the grammar again.

That was really cool. I think you should make it into a series or something.

YAOI IS SO FREAKING RETARDED

Wow, that so sweet! I always thought they would get together! I really liked it! Hey would you pleaze review for one of my stories? Thanks a bunch!

youre good. write a second one.

Awww...that was so sweet!

Aww...nice!

This story was just...so incredibly sweet...*sniff*

I had a bit of trouble keeping the names straight, ditto who was talking when, but other than that, wonderful! Inspired! Brilliant!

I've always been a Jadeite/Nephrite & Kunzite?Zoisite fan.

Screw the Sailor Scouts, hooray for the Generals!

TTFN!

-Bella-

Yay! I love Jed, he was the most evil of all generals

Will you be writing more?

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Aww...cutecutecutecutecute! ) I saw this on your site first, but was too lazy to email/sign your guestbook, but then i searched you on ffnet, and now I can review! YAY! okee, now I'm a fan of Jadeite, but there's nothing on him! ARG! And on a side note, pleeease finish that story...the untitled one, w/ King Calcite. I REALLY want to know what goes on next; I'm curious!_

GOOD

i originally read this story on your web page carnisy, to i completely understand that jeddy and neffy should be together. i think they make a cute couple _ you really should get the sm/star wars prodigy out here. i completely laughed my ass off on that one. and to all those you don't think jedy and neffy shouldn't be together (*cough* moon mamma *cough*) you should look at carnisy's page and she gives many reasons fromt the manga that makes them just as good of a couple as kunzite and zoizite, so :P

well, sometimes it was hard to tell who was talking during the dance, and you called Naru "Molly" twice, but the story was really sweet, I like the idea of the 4 kings as regular guys (and friends with Usagi, yet?). It was creative. Myself, I never saw any evidence at all that Nephrite's feelings toward Naru were anything but caring for her platonically (like Mamoru and Setsuna, for an example off the top of my pretty head) but you had a really unique take on the whole story. Personally, I want you to write more on your Star Wars parody, even if you don't write much BSSM anymore. It's just so gut-bustingly funny!

There is not the slightest bit of evidence in the anime or the manga, the plot or the characters, for any romantic relationship between Nephrite and Jadeite. It's completely out of context, out of character, out of continuity, and just plain wrong. The canon couple is Nephrite and Naru. Don't go breaking up a canon couple just for some yaoi kicks. It degrades the integrity of the anime.