I like the titles of the parts and the verbs are seriously effective! The changing points of view are really cool and I like having to figure out exactly who is talking (you give great context clues). Good for you for making Gustave accept the truth instead of running away screaming :) This is wonderful!

I love how dramatic this is and the ending especially.

This is really good.

What a beautiful poem I love it if there is more I would love to read it :)