 Anonymous 1/24/12 . chapter 1 I like how you put that little "oh" there, I thought it was so cute! Usually people go with "he cut her off with his lips" or "suddenly, she was interrupted with a kiss" or always something along the lines of that and I'm glad you found something original and infinitely more adorable. |
 Sunny in Wonderland 8/28/11 . chapter 1Funny, but really sweet too. Good writing, I love LilyxJames fluff!xD |
 littleLaralevin 7/16/11 . chapter 1Cute story, great work :) |
 SpiritedWind 7/14/11 . chapter 1Aww that was so sweet. Lots of great fluff. :) |
 xXthenextbookwormXx 6/16/11 . chapter 1Awww. This is the sweetest damn thing... Both boredom and apparently tired illness make people do strange things. Hell, I wouldn't object that much to kissing James... Or maybe I would. I'm kind of the kid that is mocked by the 'popular' kids so odds are I wouldn't have much to do with the boy, were I there. |
 ocean-stars 6/15/11 . chapter 1i literally went AWWWWWWWWWW when i read this :3 it was so so so so so so so so sooo cute. |
 Sirius' Sweetheart 6/14/11 . chapter 1Well this was sufficiently cute enough for me (: I started off in a pissed off mood && now I'm in a nice an mellow state due to the fluff. I suppose I owe you my deepest regards of thanks haha Good idea. I liked it. Find some more one-shots in those documents, yeah? (; |
 lunerflower 6/14/11 . chapter 1That was too cute! Great story line I loved it :) |
 GreenArrowRocks 6/14/11 . chapter 1Very cute. I loved the story line and the fact that you didn't make it an overly long story. |
 okieeiffel 6/14/11 . chapter 1Cute! Nicely done! |
 SpiritxXxWildfire 6/14/11 . chapter 1OHHHHHH I LOVED THIS ONE! cute, very cute. |
 wearingrosecoloredglasses 6/13/11 . chapter 1Great story! |
 Fire Breathing Crocodile 6/13/11 . chapter 1 Sweet and funny. I like it. ) |
 Karin 6/13/11 . chapter 1 Very cute! I love how James just knew that Lily had too much pride to ask for help. His nonchalance and her nervous chatter were simply perfect! |
 ElvesWizardsCentaursOhmy 6/13/11 . chapter 1WHAT is THIS! Is this a one-shot of yours that I...*haven't* seen before? WHAT a surprise!
Ugh! I just feel sick from reading that first paragraph. Thanks Lily. Thanks a lot.
You know you have good friends when they copy extra NOTES for you. Legit friendship right there man.
*snort* A textbook in a waste basket? I mean I'm not fond of textbooks that much either but really. Wonder if she accidentally blew her nose in it? *snort*
Ooohhh...I like the whole repeating the notes bit; it perfectly shows that she's drowsy and falling asleep and stuff.
Geee...wonder who that bloody prat could be? Gosh so many possible answers...
OH MY GOSH it's POTTER! Did NOT expect that at ALL! Because, you know, Lily calls SO MANY PEOPLE bloody prats xD
Err..James...you DO know she's sick, right?
See James? Anyway, how nice. Very sweet ending. And I like the ending, a nice place to..err...end it. Good one-shot darling! Keep it up! ) |