Wow. That was good. Dark, yes, but good. A very interesting take on how things might have been different. Good work.

poor Jonathan :( nice plot, though.

I liked this. Katrina was an interesting character, and it was nice to see more of her in this fic. I also liked the Jonathon redemption part. I'm not sure about Warren ... you were a bit more forgiving of him than I would have been. Good story, though. :)