This is much better than the real one.

Ohhhhhhhh : D ouch poor Nevva. Though its good to know why she switched sides. Please update soon

Awwwww poor Bobby. I really like him and Loor as a couple. Great story. I love Pendragon. Update soon.

For those of you questioning Bobby's actions/intentions I realize now that I was a little, ok a LOT off, I was thinking of a different character while writing Bobby, OOPS! I am so sorry I have changed and reuploaded the chapter so please, all I'm asking is that you read the changed chapter and give the story a second chance. Thanks! I understand if you don't though.

I liked it until the whole "Let me cheat on my lifelong wife with what is baciclly an ex-covict despite the face that I brought you to Solara and you had no say in the matter you might have wanted to stay back on second earth" thing

Okay, two-timing Bobby? I'm confused. Oh well, your fic.

WRITE ON!

i think you should totally continue. i love seeing bobby and loor stories. even if that isn't what you planned, continue anyway

You should continue it! I get why Bobby ran away but I'm doubtful that would be his reaction. He has Courtney after all.

WRITE ON!

Add me to the club! Nevva is a great character. Even if she's evil. Some times the evil makes the characters better!

Nevva is my favorite character too! U will find out later how her spirit has returned, that is, if u think I should continue it and as for the whole her and Bobby thing...maybe...I am pro Bobby and Courtney but I do like to mix things up a bit *smiles mischiviously* muahahahahaha

umm...i though nevva's spirit ended? But anyways i always wanted nevva to be alive and...be with b bobby. Could you do that? My fav character is her!