This is really an amazing story, i just cant stop reading! Good job:)

Please update soon! I really love it :)

Nice job though you did have an excelant choice of songs during the entire time i was reading i couldn't stop my self from listening to songs from the anime. During the fight between kakashi and naota i had to listen the track little busters and the played out in my head like i was watch it on tv all those years ago. ahh FLCL first anime i ever watched and to this day still one of my favorites but enough of my ramblings just wanted to say good job and keep up the good work.

Death is a such a boss in Darksiders 2

This I the best thing ever! I'm a big flcl fan and this is great! Ur writing is great giving vivid images and keeping me hanging on every word wanting to find out what's next. Keep up the good work!

My bad meant Ninamori

Just a suggestion the way u set up the story makes it seem like Namani like Naota (not a bad thing) I like Namani with Naota so wouldn't mind if u made this NamanixNaotaxHaruko it'd be something new imo u don't have to do it not saying change the whole story (it's a great story) just with Namani kissing Naota and him not pushing away or anything (good this be didn't) made it a possibility in the story.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter
-Shini Namikaze

"The strength of the soul (spirit, non rational parts of the self)" Hah, who said two years of Latin wasn't worth it?

oh me gerd, that was so good. i sat here for a couple hours, slowly reading everything you wrote from chapter 5 to now. The fight scenes, i can just picture them perfectly. I'm extremely excited for the next chapter. Every character is amazing, the way you have made Ta-kun so badass.
One question though, How come you make Haruko cry so much, especially in front of Naota. She just seems a whole lot more sensitive then she was in the series.
Also I am extremely mad at Naota for not telling Haruko that he kissed that other girl. :I two-timing son of a bitch. :I I wish i was able to just jump into this series and give him a good punch. I mean, sure he isn't dating Haruko but Naota told her he loved her, then let this home-wrecker kiss him, and then kissed back. Bro, bro, bro. That's just not cool ta-kun. Just because you are getting more popular with the ladies doesn't mean you can go smooching other people.
Gaku: SMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOC H
:I shut up Gaku.

Hey, keep going. Write until you got your point across. The time between updates doesn't matter, just that you express what you feel. Good on ya man, keep goin'.

Will ya updated?

Great story so far. Looking forward to more.

I love it! please please please write more. has got to be one of the best fanfics ive read so far except for a few minor things,but overall i love the story and hope you have time to get another chapter out soon because i am anxious to read it.

I AM HOOKED! you got me on your fishing pole bro XD I really hope you can continue writing!

Hey man I just wanted to say your fan fiction is truly great and keep it up because I'm hooked!