This chapter was a splendid and slightly bittersweet ending to a most brilliant story.

How the Blue Fairy feels about being in the water reminds me of how I used to feel when I went swimming, and today I would likely feel so much more so if I did, though I'd love to have someone like Pinocchio to help me through it, and he seems to remind me of Fabrizio De Rossi at the age he is now.

This was yet again another brilliant chapter that told more about the Blue Fairy's inner self. And I loved the description of how it felt for her to walk along the seashore.

This was a very sweet chapter to read about Pinocchio's family life. And it was also brilliant how you explained the Blue Fairy's shortcomings and misgivings about being what she is under her human disguise.

It is really neat to read about the Blue Fairy as a main character and more than just a granter of wishes. I can now easily picture her as more of fully round character.

That was a sweet ending, Walls. I liked how the pair interacted. Please update at your , Christopher Scott: A Gentleman Thief

This is really getting interesting. I love how well you were able to portray the children's cruelty to Carrie. Excellent job on this chapter!

Wonderful chapter. I'm so glad that you updated so quickly and I look forward to the next chapter.

Interesting story, thus far, Walls. I like how Pinocchio is still a good person, and the fairy's ability to transform into a human is interesting. Please update at your , Christopher Scott: A Gentleman Thief

This is pretty good, I hope you update soon.