|Reviews for Tick Tock|
| Ryromaniac 4/25/12 . chapter 4
This really is an interesting story so far...I hope you decide to continue it someday soon! :)
| nicholee33 12/20/11 . chapter 4
I love this story update soon
| barbara87413 11/10/11 . chapter 4
Really have enjoyed what I have read so far, love how Rogue/Marie is conflicted about the cure. Dying to know what is wrong with her, hope more is coming soon!
| compa16 11/3/11 . chapter 2
I like this pairing
| compa16 11/3/11 . chapter 1
| angel897 7/27/11 . chapter 4
i like it intresting start
| CraZy-InsanNe995 7/18/11 . chapter 4
Haha update soon pleasE! I cant wait to read more from you!
| Echo Dancer 7/2/11 . chapter 4
So happy to see a new chapter this morning! Hope the camping trips have been fun. I did spot a few typos, but considering what you were working with, you did a great job.
Thoroughly enjoyed Warren's POV. Yes indeed, the boy has a crush on the girl! Fun how Logan picked up on it, too.
Good work with the retrospect on Warren's encounters of Rogue. The little touches you inserted, such as how he stumbled over his words slightly, all add to our understanding of his personality. Also liked how you very subtly inserted how sharp Warren's vision is by relating his observation of her eyes as Marie spoke with Logan in the dark hallway after she returned from taking the cure. Very nicely done.
Poor Warren - he's got it bad. He'll just have to keep trying with Marie. Looking forward to C5!
| Echo Dancer 6/18/11 . chapter 3
Ah, short but sweet! Like the idea of Rogue connecting with Charles through his journal. The scene reinforced just how much she misses the man who meant so much to her and made such an impact on her life.
Very few words spoken between Rogue and Warren, but a lot going on that is unspoken. And that sneaky boy took the journal so she'd have to see him to finish.
And you've left us to wonder just like Rogue - was it Warren that left her tingly or the cure wearing off?
The clock keeps ticking off time for more than one unfolding event...
And the next chapter will be much longer? Absolutely love lengthy segments - one has time to get completely lost in the world the author created. Long live long chapers!
| Echo Dancer 6/15/11 . chapter 2
It's hard to imagine why you haven't received any reviews on this beautifully told story as yet. This is incredibly well written...top-notch spelling and grammar; a strong running theme regarding the ticking away of time; and the emotions portrayed within Rogue are complex, intriguing, and realistic. The way you weave thoughts, gestures, and narrative is silky smooth - the best way I can describe it.
The remorse and emptiness Marie feels about the loss of her powers and her reaction to now being able to touch is so sad. She'd taken the cure in hopes of a happier life, but that has not been the outcome. Added to that is the loss of people she cared deeply for. You help us to feel her pain on both counts.
And you introduced two of the primary characters immediately, which I liked. I always search for stories with Warren, but sadly they are far too uncommon. To say I was thrilled to see a new posting featuring him is an understatement. He comes across as slightly playful, but also sincerely and concerned. Yet doesn't push Rogue too hard; just gently reminds her she's not alone. Looking forward to reading more of your version of our favorite winged mutant.
I'm completely enthralled and have to know where this story goes, with my hope being that it leads to more than friendship between Warren and Rogue. Can one who is still a mutant help heal someone who is not? I think we will be finding out.
You absolutely, positively MUST complete this story. Please don't stop until we've reach the ending or I'll be heartbroken. Certainly hope that at a minimum, the visitor counts encourage you to continue. I for one will be here for every chapter from this point forward. Cannot wait until C3!