loved this so much, i am writer and im writing a portal fan fiction but i could never right poetry like that it was just beautiful, cant wait for portal 2 one... KEEP ON WRITING

Wow, you're a GREAT poet! :D This is sooo cooool! O_o

Nah, what do you mean some lines doesn't flow? THIS IS AWESOME!

Of course, I am a big Portal fan, too. Otherwise, I couldn't understand the poem :)

You should put this on the Portal Forum! (On Steam Forums!)

VALVe should see this, too! :) I'm sure they will like it.

Hello, and, again, welcome to the... list of good poets. :D

This was lovely and was fun to read. I like how you managed to only need the very crucial parts in the portal 1 timeline. You should make more!

Take your time but update soon!

that was great! I cant wait for next one. Portal 2!

That was... AMAZING! OMG! I never imagined that Portal could be conveyed in such a way that it flowed smoothly and RHYMED! I honestly admire you for that. Pleas make a Portal 2 one! INCLUDE WHEATLEY. You are AMAZING!

haha this was cute i loved it :D

I giggled at 'rouge AI.' Otherwise, it's nice; well-written.