I love it ! The game they played were dangerous but it was necessary.. I hope the happiness will be theirs also :))) Thank you for sharing this amazing story :))))

Love it! I love stories with a little danger, love and lust!

excellent story.

the only thing I can say about this is I wish it were longer and they did get married and have those babies

no I don't feel sorry for the twins but your going to have to fake Edward, Bella and Jaspers deaths for all to work and the twins to go on with their lives and get re married and for Bella Edward and Jasper to have one.

why all of a suden is he wanting to have Edward followed shouldn't he have dne that before he married his daughter

so they married people to get in this family are they secret agents or something

I don't understand if these two love each other aren't they with the wrong mates

Really good! Surprised b/c I didn't realize it was a CIA/FBI fic - those are my FAV!- so that was a bonus! I've got u on alert should u ever write more for this series. *hint hint* :)
Thx!

Hey,

an interesting short story.

Thanks for writing.

Lissy

this was a short and sweet story! I very much enjoyed reading it. Thank you for all your efforts!

yep I thought Jasper was a loyal agent...I don't feel too bad for Alec and Jane...they know what their father is into...if not well then they're in for a rude awakening!

so Aro is suspicious of Edward, is he? Jasper is with Bella and Edward, isn't he? No clue as to what's on the hard drive...

This was a cute little story. I enjoyed it.

oh my...is 5 chapters going to be enough for this story? I love it already and will devour every chapter...