Aw, yet another amazing story to make me aw throughout the entire thing! I truly love these Jess/Becker stories from you. They are brilliant!

You're right - it was the best Jess/Becker episode! I loved all their scenes together - he was so worried about her! Wish the powers that be would see to it that we get more episodes like that! I want their relationship to develop slowly and all but it's killer!

The banter! The perfectly executed banter! I loved it. He was so smug teasing her like that and then she threw out the "security stuff" line and I almost fell out of my seat laughing at his reaction. This was so brilliant :D

Damn great, girl!

Please, please write more? I want to see what happens when they meet again and their relationship will develop from casual teasing to full on flirting and beyond ;) just pit up a Jecker as well if you're interested! Thanks for this amazing story :)

This was amazing! You really captured their relationship! xD

I think ep4 was definitely one of the best episodes this season, especially for all the Jecker moments! It's so funny; even my little brother is wanting them to hurry up and get together!

But anyway, onto the real reason for this review: Your story was absolutely brilliant. I smiled, if not giggled, the whole time I was reading. I loved how he started teasing her about liking his hair, though I think the moment of "priceless" was achieved when she threw the "security stuff" back in his face.

All in all, a very entertaining story.

Aww, that was great! I totally loved it. They were both very much in character and totally cute! :-)

Wonderfully written! This would fit so perfectly after Ep 4!

Becker is so cute when he's trying to hide his real feelings; just doesn't want everyone to know how muhc he really cares.

Awww... super cute! And yes, that was a fantastic episode. I can't believe they just threw it at us like that (they being the writers). Not that I am complaining, nope not here, haha!

LOL I enjoyed that! Good for Jess, it might not have been the first time she's gotten to tease Becker but it was one of the better ones. Nice story tag. I can just imagine what the rest of the gang are thinking about 'security stuff."

Just watched the episode and loved it.

Your story fits just so perfectly.

You should co-write the skripts ;).

Nice, short and sweet. You captured their characters very well :)

When I was watching this episode earlier today it was getting far too intense and I couldnt handle it, so I paused it and googled to see if becker or jess died. Up popped a link to a live journal forum where people were talking about Becker/Jess and listing their favorite jecker moments from 5x04. It was hilarious, because everything listed was EXACTLY what I had noticed/had been fangirling over and I was like: wow...this person really knows their stuff. Then I realized that the usename of the person was rubycasper, and I was like: wait...thats the usename of the fanfiction writer who writes all those amazing stories about jess and becker! All that being said, I hope it was you, because that would be really cool:) And secondly, this story was really good!

You had me giggling like an idiot! Arg I love it! Episode 5x04 is DEFINITELY my fav and this story just made it better! :D :D :D :D :D