To be honest, I kinda wanted Hermione to die in this LOL I found it would have been appropriate but regardless I loved this story! Thank you for the sleepless nights reading this instead :P

I think as they all grew to love each other, I grew to love this story more too.

I thought you got it all out there really well.

Twilight as a horror story - hilarious!

(Btw I love the way this story makes you feel at peace, even though she is dying. And the way their relationships are so loving.)

what an awesome five chapters! you tied everything up so well, while also maintaining some mystique, which was incredibly effective! i loved reading this story and am glad that it had a reasonably happy ending.

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No! Ah, that made me unbelievably sad. And they were all so mean to Adrian at the end, what with Marcus punching him a fair bit :P

Through the last chapters I was like "Maybe they'll just make another list! And they'll complete that list instead, and everyone will live happily after!"

But yeah. That wouldn't have been that great. It was a perfect, bittersweet ending :) and I felt it was a really unique romance, instead of a lot of generic stuff that's thrown around lately.

Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. :)

Oh. My. God.

Please excuse my french, but this was sheer fucking genius. It was original. It was well written. It made me laugh and cry! The moment you start to realise what's happened, I literally started to choke up. You seriously have a gift! This was bloody wonderful!

:)

i'm pleased that Hermione and Theo were alive. but some sadness about Adrian's death.

when will you post the first chapter of "Rules of Engagement" ?

Omg i was so scared!

Poor Adrian but i think you pick right...

I loved this story all the way through (as I do all of them) but I need to know, and I do mean need, what happened with Blaise, Theo and Hermione. I did feel a little more information would have been good in the last chapter it just seemed to be they got married, baby was born, Adrian randomly sacrificed himself and brown jumper got buried. I thoroughly enjoyed it I just thought the ending lacked a little bit of closure. Of course this is purely my opinion but as an avid fan I would feel bad for not trying to help you be your best. I know you went through a lot during the writing of this and wish you all the best.

great story! loved it! xoxo

Tear about Adrian. :( smile that hermione and Theo survived. :) your stories are an emotional roller coaster.

Tear about Adrian. :( smile that hermione and Theo survived. :) your stories are an emotional roller coaster.

Tear about Adrian. :( smile that hermione and Theo survived. :) your stories are an emotional roller coaster.

This was a phenomenal fic, and I'm crying so much right now, it's pathetic.