Now this is how the story should have ended! I loved how you proved that it was practical for Christine to love Erik. I always kind of loved the phantom because despite what he did, in the end, all he ever desired was to be loved. You have a great talent for this and I hope you keep up the great work.

This is one of the best fics I've ever read, and I can't believe it was your first! You're a very talented writer. And just saying, this was 1000 times a better sequel than LND.

This is beautiful. You often find rubbish writing and story telling here but this is just incredible! The writing is amazing and the story is all you wish for the phantom and Christine! Also I can tell you're a fan from the hints towards the book like the torture room! I love it

Thank you for sharing a beautiful, well written story which I enjoyed reading very much.

It's over. Why, why must it be over?!
Oh well. The ending was beautiful and I have another story from you to await. Thank you so much for writing this.

I cried happily all through this chapter. :')

Finally, a chapter I haven't read, so I can review! I hate that FanFiction doesn't let me review the same chapter twice, because I'm rereading and finishing this story, and it's been killing me to finally have my thoughts on it in words and not be able to express them.
Really, nothing I've ever read has made me feel the way this story has. It seems crazy, but it's true. Pure, raw emotion has grasped me in this story. I've cried, I've laughed, smiled, been angry- I've shouted at my computer and clenched my fists, I've audibly "aww"ed at sweet moments, I've begged the characters to take certain paths. In conversations, with each character speaking, my emotions quickly swing back and forth. I love this. So much. I'm really sad that I'm close to finishing it.

Just finished reading it. Amazing. It was really well wtitten.

Oh, my, goodness. This is so amazing!

Dear bo-leigh bella,

You are an amazing storyteller. Is it possible that you are still a high school student? You show an understanding of life and human nature that is far beyond your years. Amazing, amazing you are.

The passionate innocence of this story was refreshing to me, an almost 60-year-old woman.

Keep on doing what you're doing, and you will become a master at character development. As much as your busy life allows, attend workshops and classes on the art and craft of writing. Not only will it hone your skills, but it will bring you into contact with people who share your muse.

When your first novel is published (not if but when), please post a note on your profile. Many of us will want to buy your book.

Thanks for this lovely story.

I'm only on chapter 8 so far, but I have the utmost intentions of continuing. I love this so far!

Wow. That was seriously seriously good. I enjoyed every moment of that story. I wish it really happened! Truly fantastic well done :)

This was an absolutely beautiful story! What a wonderful ending! I will remember this story everytime i see POTO

this is the most realistic way that their relationship would have been if we had just kept on going in POTO (im blocking out LND because, though i may love ramin, sierra, and webber for their brilliance, i can't see it happening so crazy like LND)-I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR STORY! rest assured this is what i will imagine whenever i watch the ending of POTO!

WOW! What a great twist! i love the idea of Erik's firm muscular body-i will be going to sleep thinking of that tonight! (shhhhh don't tell my boyfriend!)