New to reading fanfiction and found this one very original and made for a good read, are there any plans to finish this series?. Thx, 31Bravo

good,keep going.great ideas.I'm hoping that youll post another chapter soon

Here I am asking for another chapter. If you need someone to proof read then I will help if only to get new chapters. I read like it is going out of style.

Really good storyline.Please update soon.

Your story is confusing and is purly people talking! I found the starting to be interesting but it kept going and going! Plus why dont you use spell check and get the grammar checked its confusing because of the spelling mistakes aswell.

ahhh! cool!

keep writing!

and i love the fact that tenchi is now evil >=D

I really like your story.Please update soon.

hey this is a good story...though im getting kind of confused..like ryoko seems lesbian or was it a guy she was with...no it was a girl..i think atleast. well the name tsu-sami is weird though but hey its something different and its intresting! and i like this story so far so please continue again! (like i said in my last review! :P). and if theres anyone flaming this then go away and give me some water to take out the flames you left!

Tsu-Sami? O_o I think this fic has now hit a new low. As if completely ignoring the actual sourse material and turning this into basically a Tenchi fiction in name only (since the character & location names are the only things it has in common with Tenchi Muyo) and having Tenchi marry virtually anything with a pair of breasts & a pulse weren't bad enough, now you've added the lamest version of the Sasami/Tsunami merger I've ever seen. The only way this could get worse would be if you made it a lemon & inserted mass orgies.

Tsu-sami??oh well...write some more! :)

more more moer hurry this was great

Great story write more quickly

This is a great story. It appears to me that you said to h### with the previous characterizations and just did what you wanted. It works. I am also glad you have Ryoko getting into this. I think she would. Can't wait for the next one.

It seems you have taken some Egyptian mythos (Ala stargate-SG1) into this story. My only gripe is how lasidazical Ryoko took the fact of Tenchi siring so many!
But the way Azusa is acting, it's sure to be an interesting battle since Tenchi will do anything to take Ayeka, Washu, and Sasami back.
Oh, and Where is Mihoshi again?
dennisud

Ok, this is getting ... Crowded!
A 7th wife, won't that be greeted by the others with a bit of apprehension?
And with the New three treed ship, it should be interesting how the Emperor will deal with a mature and confident Tenchi, Ryoko, and Nef!?!?
well I'm sure you'll keep everything interesting and ... plausible!
dennisud