I likes the idea of justin having a twin sister. but i think it would have been better if Ren had to cut her hair its more, distressing, then having to stop painting your nails and a lot of girls would sob if they have to cut their hair, plus once you cut your hair you cant just re-attach it over the weekend like you can

with painting your nails so it would make her feel even worse. a lot of girls would be able to relate better with her to because they might not want to cut their hair. But justin having a sister was a really good idea, when he hesitated to tell seth the story

kinda showed the soft side of the seth. i always saw seth as a though guy.

keep lovin the world

Wow... This is just so deep. The way you told it had an almost, mistic feel to it. It really did sound like something out of the book. I don't know why it's just... This twin... She sounds like someone who should've been metioned in the Malice series. This is truly magnificent and I would love to read more from you. Please keep on writting.