That's so good! Ahaha, I love how well it fits in with the story, but from Caroline's point of view.

And it's a great way to end the short story!

I really like the way you write when you write about the Laws of Magic series! Can't wait for your next story! Please keep writing :D

My brain is not handling being inside Caroline's head while she checks him out. Like really. Even my blushes have blushes.

Also the sheer hilarity and gloriousness of everything you have written.

...and I am now going to navigate rationally AWAY from this page and banish all thought of it and its contents from my mind.

REALLY.

3 D.