I would like to say that this is quite close to the way Alison Goodman wrote her Eon series. I have a few helpful remarks to give you. One, Alison rarely uses the ... when going onto a new paragraph. But I like the way you tried to copy her writing style. The storyline is great. Keep writing; i bet the story will turn out great. Thank you for giving credit to Alison Goodman with the characters and additudes, because not many people give credit to her on the stories they make about Eona.

I think you're doing wonderfully! Just keep up the good work!

please update this it getting better by the chapter

I love this fanfiction! Sorry for not reviewing for the earlier chapters. As a fellow fanfiction writer I can understand the amount of time it takes to write a chapter and I respect the fact that if you take more time on the chapters you write, then the more better they will be. Hope that advice helps and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Having reread this i really want an update before christmas... even though i dont celebrate it

is there every going to be more the way u have the story lead u could add more to it
This is really good i would like see more

This is a good story. I always thought that there should have been a sequel to the last story and yours is pretty good. I have to admit, the characters are still in character in this one. Apart for a few mistakes here and there, I say this is a story worth reading. Well done and keep up the good work!

Cool story! I really like it! :-)

YAY YOU UPDATED! :D I love how you portray Kygo's and Eona's relationship! Especially all her concern over his safety at the beginning. Very well written! Please update soon!

Can't wait for chapter five :)

Yay, you're back! I really liked this chapter! It's very good. Thank you for updating. Please update again soon!

Well it is a good story but excuse me while I go on a little rant. "What is up with the Eon fandom? Does no one finish thier work? I want to keep reading. It's soooo good. People should update more!"
Ok I'm done. But please update. The chapters are a little hm how to say this, not dull but they don't reach a point. Please update so I can see what happens next.

This plotline promises to be intriguing, and I can't wait to see where you go with it! You write well; your writing flows for the most part and the characters are done well. Just two things: some of the sections are very abrupt and short; perhaps try lengthening them or combining a few into one? And I was reading quickly, but I noticed a few instances where your I's weren't capitalized. Other than that, great job, and I hope to see more! :)

Great chapter! You're sticking very close to how Allison had her characters set up, I think :) There is a bit of skipping around. I'd try to lengthen the scenes a bit more and lessen the formality between Kygo and Eona, but that's just me. Of course, being Naiso, I can see where some formalities would be needed. Anyhow, update soon please! I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next!

I really liked how she honored her vow with Yuso about his son. Although this chapter was a bit choppy, jumping around and such. But still a great chapter! Please update soon!