I thought this was really great :)
...it could've happened...

Oh, I disagree with your beta. I totally see this pairing happening. And you've written it so well.

Nicely done!

This was a great first fic! :)

I actually very much enjoyed this! Though your beta might have made a good point of the pairing not being very logical, your writing style and the character interactions/ dialogue totally made up for it! And I personally like this pairing, even if it isn't realistic! Great job! ;D