 lu3lu4 5/3/12 . chapter 1The conection that you give them is insane. I could picture this as how they meet in the show. Great Job. |
 PotterPerfect 07 12/20/11 . chapter 1That was so good, you really characterized them well :) great job! |
 Rosalie Carlisle Cullen 10/7/11 . chapter 1cant wait for more chapters ! GOTTA LOVE JADE AND BECK'S GAME |
 heather XD 9/10/11 . chapter 1THIS TURNED OUT AMAZING! |
 LizAndAvanForever 8/20/11 . chapter 1i dont understand how you could not love beck&jade together. from the way you wrote this story, it seems like you know exactly why they're perfect for each other.
i think if you really like the idea of bade, your stories would be amazing. probably better than most. |
 Ace5492 7/28/11 . chapter 1Wonderful! |
 Ella Lea 7/14/11 . chapter 1I think it was well written but Jade would never let a guy just touch her like that, I think beck's trust from her should've taken longer to earn and she definetly would not have let him touch her up there, that's not jade's style. Beck wouldn't have said that he was a horny pervert, more like how she intriuges or interests him. Please continue, I'd like to see where this story will go. |
 fallendrastic 7/1/11 . chapter 1this was sweet, nice actually, and you did a good job of capturing jade and beck's personalities. nicely done. |
 aloxi 6/19/11 . chapter 1I AM TOTALLY OKAY WITH BEING BLAMED FOR THIS, JSYK. it is true tragedy that you hade bade because you write them pretty much perfectly. they're playing games with each other and that's what draws them and aklfdhalkjfhaklf my bade heart, it's exploding. you also got andre really in-character which i love and the only reasonable thing i could do at this point is keysmash a few more times, BUT I WON'T BECAUSE YOU DON'T NEED TO SEE THAT.
ALL MY HEARTS TO YOU, KATIE. ALL OF THEM. |
 readingrainbows 6/19/11 . chapter 1I think it's the lamest thing ever when people who write the beck/jade chemistry so well, claim to hate them together. Because writing them together so well like this also implies that you get the characters, and that you get them together. This was a very well written, refreshingly different approach to how beck and jade came to be, and it was written in beck's point of view, which usually i don't like but this, apparently, was the exception.
I really hope that despite the fact that you normally ship tori/beck (which frankly i've
never able to wrap my head around) you still work on the occasional beck/jade piece. |
 bizarre-reason 6/17/11 . chapter 1LET ME LOVE YOU. AND THIS FIC. sdfkfjsdkfjsd why is it that the people who HATE jadebeck end up writing super amazing fics for them? like, seriously- maybe I should try my hand at bori (LOL JK NEVARRRR) but yeah.
this fic is amazing and beautiful and beck is such a pervert, but it's okay because jade likes it because they're horny little freaks and it's amazing. everything's amazing. your writing is amazing and i love it so very much. and this review is such a ramble-y mess, BUT I CAN'T HELP MYSELF. I LOVE YOU, AND I LOVE THIS DFKJSDKFJSD :3 favoriting, obviously |
 Karly Black 6/17/11 . chapter 1This looks awesome! ) I love it! 3
I love Bade, but why don't you? They're pretty damn cute in my eyes! Like, what doy ou not like abaout them?
Anyway, this rocked! You should write Bade more often, you write it well! Amazing story! I would DIE if they actually DID meet this way! ) 3
Epic job. |
 Lovely Amelie 6/17/11 . chapter 1beck is such a hipster omg
i love the way you write boy!pov because i fail at boy!pov
also despite the fact that you wrote bade and i love you deeply for it, i also adore the way you wrote all the other characters, too - they're both in character and original, and alsjdfsdf you're awesome and ily foreverrrr :) |
 alliscat 6/17/11 . chapter 1I love the tone of the story and think you captured the spirit of the characters really well. |
 D R O W N-I N-S E Q U I N S 6/17/11 . chapter 1I haven't talked to you in like f.o.r.e.v.e.r. which is really all my fault and for that I totally and utterly apologize and beg for your forgiveness (if you even remember me!)
But on to the stuff you really want to hear, what I thought of your story:
First of all I am totally heartbroken that you don't like bade because I love them and if this story is any point to go by, then you could write them really well!
I loved this as a first capture of their relationship. The fact that they're both a little brooding, a little mysterious and whatnot. I kind of liked Beck being rude to Andre in order to find out more about Jade because I have a feeling if this show weren't on Nick, Beck would so be the type of guy who is always a tad bit rude and drinking and being mayhem-ic. And Jade is def the kind of girl who just doesn't like people too close to her, always one or two steps away type thing.
Anyways this is totally lovely and I hope that your friends can persuade you to do more bade (: |