this was great.

An overly harsh punishment for poor Warren...I was a bit taken aback by the very black humour at the end, it seemed a bit too cruel. Considering that this is set after Dead Things, there is no way that Tara and Anya would have so much reason to hate him, and Tara would NEVER allow a human to get killed like that. There is so much fic that allows Warren to be a fully rounded character and this one made him merely into a cliche. Admittedly I'm a Warren fan, but this story didn't seem to accurately portray any of the characters well. Sorry to be blunt!

LOL! Excellent.

I like the writing style, but...

tara would never ever do something like that...she's way too much of a gentle soul to let april beat warren to death. i also think she couldn't have pulled that aspen act off, to be honest...if tara and anya had switched roles it would have been slightly more believable..

and anyways..you killed him too...great..very original...i don't want him dead..i want him to live...! hehe...

Oh, but I think the head up his ass thing was great and funny...hehe...I like that kind of humour.

sorry, for grammar or spelling mistakes, english isn't my native language.

You have an interesting writing style. You're good at writing comedic moments under strange circumstances, though I do have to agree with Angelus, because having Warren beaten to death seemed to have crossed a line that shouldn't even be approached, IMO. BTW, it probably wasn't your intention to attract any Warren lovers to your story, but let me just say that the idea of Warren, tied spread-eagle to a bed and completely helpless, got this red-blooded female a bit excited!

Ridiculous, hilarious, and i loved it.

A bit gruesome...Warren gets beaten to death? I think being arrested would be a mnore suited fate. Nevertheless, it contains your unique style and wit. Good job.

Not a bad story, but I thought your Warren was pretty one-dimensional. Even on the show as a fairly straightforward villain, he's showed a lot more depth.

A fitting end for Warren. Thanks for a bit of catharsis.

And justice is served.

Cool.