incredible...i think that's a great story...

Very, very beautiful. I love it. Cecilia is my favourite character, and this is a great story centered around her. Good job!! It's going on my favourites list.

i liked that.. not really a happy death, but u figure shes hapy through that and that just makes the reader happy..

I absolutely loved this story! Please keep it up!

I like this its good! Write more!

That was really good! You explained the emotions really well!