Sweet. I'm glad this is a good(but not perfect)Dumbledore story. I look forward to seeing how things develop from here. I'm also glad you've explained things I had wondered about before in the previous version. The plot, so far, is much improved. Hope you update again soon.

Hmm nice liked the original though look forward to more and though like the canon pairings sorta despise harry/hermione if from books, movie emma alright but the one from the book is too controlling and niave for harry and feel ginny is nothing more than a tagalong and muuch for this harry as well as ron being lazy and stupid, I think this would be better placing him in ravenclaw and if pairings maybe a greengrass girl for being ambitous wanting change and willing to work or something

Great chapter. I look forward to seeing where it goes from here. Please update again soon.

great chapter i can't wait for the next update.

Excellent start

Interesting, I was about to start the other version of this, then saw you were redoing it so I read this first chapter. How much is changed in this one from the other one and would it be best to not read that one at all you think?

The re-do is nice so far. The only problem I see is the numerous typos within the text. You may want to deal with them, but they aren't especially important.

Considering that i just re-read the original this will probally be boring til you catch up :)

Good choice on the pairings though! I dont dislike Harry/Hermione though. I'll read jsut about anything except Harry involved Slash.

Hope to read the rest soon! still like it. bye

Good start to the story. Looking forward to reading more.

So long without Prodigy or Unexpected Visitor updates... :(, I thought you stopped writing.

I'll follow this rewrite eagerly as the other! :)) I can't wait to see what you changed :)

Keep the good work :)

This story looks really good so far. I eagerly await the next update! I love these kind of stories!

Isca

great chapter i can't wait for the next update.

This story is off to a good start. So Harry will forge his own life. Interesting, if he can pull it off. I wonder if Remus will be making any pilgrimages to his friends old home. I also wonder if Fudge will make it possible for Harry's position to be hidden. Can the sensors be made to ignore Harry's signature? So Harry using his innate magic as a baby was what set the sensors off-not Voldy? I can understand that.

Can't wait for more