Very awesome story!

seeeeeeequuuuuuaaaaalll please :)

Oh man, this was great:)

OMG this is my first NCIS/Highlander cross and gotta same I am now a fan, please update soon.

woah, trippy. very cool, though. is this part of a new series, or is that it? I wouldn't mind more. ;)

Kahara-Taisho

What a wonderful story, thanks! I especially like Gibbs' affection with both Tim & Tony.

Great start...shades of Torchwood and Captain Jack! Off I go to read the rest. :D

I thought it was amazing. Really detailed, good writing, dramatic. One would wish for a sequel. ;)

I really like this story! I'd love a sequel where Tony finds out that it is him... not that I want him to die... and maybe coming across some of our favorite immortals!

aw, i was surprised when i saw that this was complete already...will there be a sequel to this? in any case, thank you for a wonderful story...i really liked it... )

still hoping for a sequel though...hehehe...cheerios! ;)

What? That's the end? Or the end of the chapter? I am hoping just the end of the chapter because I don't want to believe that you would stop there. Good story.

That was excellent. I like your description of Tim's wound, dying and coming back. Also the reactions of T&G were very realistic.

yep, i did like this! sorry to see it done now though, or are you planning on making a sequel? there is another story out there where they have Tony as the immortal, that one is good too. keep up the good work! T

Interesting story, nice twist! I hope there will be a sequel.

Interesting take on the whole Immortal thing. I liked the scientific explanation for the healing, that was cool.

I was surprised that Tim hadn't encountered a more aggressive Immortal at this point, but hey, that's what sequels are for, right?