I really like this one shot! It shows that even though Ichigo and Rukia will probably be with different people, those said people will have to deal with the fact that ichigo and rukia will always be important to eachother's life, no matter what :)

What an interesting first chapter! Sure, the premise of Ichigo and Orihime's relationship isn't...very conventional, but it certainly has that sweet element that I've always liked about their relationship. Good job, and I look forward to how you'll develop this story :)

Also, I'm more of an Ichihime fan as well, but I do love Ichigo and Rukia's dynamic as well - they really have an awesome bond that doesn't necessarily have to be romantic. I am even more fond of Rukia and Orihime's friendship though, such an adorable duo, and I hope you'll manage to flesh out Orihime's character along the way too, since I think you did a good job with the characterisation so far, in context of the story!

Although the ichiruki friendship is very cute, i think this should be for the ichihime shippers in the ichihime fandom.

what a cockblocking bitch

Awwwww!

I love the IchiRuki friendship too :3 Though I dont think Rukia would get jealous of Ichigo and Orihime ((shes a matchmaker of course LoL kidding)) but I really like that you showed that Ichigo and Rukia are really improtant to eachother and just because Orihime is Ichigos girlfriend deff doesnt mean Rukia is getting the boot. Though next time you should make more Rukia and Orihime bonding time :3 RukiHime ftw!

I can only say, you can write well, but I'm not sure about the story cos, I'm not orihime's fan.

Great one shot and the relationships the way I like them.