In the words of the infamous (to me) death88 (myself):

"YOUR STORY IS GREAT! WHY WON'T YOU F*ING UPDATE? IT'S BEEN THREE GOD D* YEARS! IT CAN'T TAKE THAT F*ING LONG TO WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER! COME ON!"

*ahem* Right then... why don't you update? And for that matter, why don't you update any of your other Big O fics. At a time (Jan. 14, 2005) when Adult Swim is actually airing Big O, I would hope to see some new updates and renewed interest in this section. Alas, nothing. If you read this, can you please at least explain why the last update was on June 9, 2002? Please send me a message via Fanfiction dot net's new PM system.

Thank you in advance, for reading this far, and hopefully answering some unanswered questions.

Sincerely,

DEATH88

WELL I LIKE IT IVE READ THE WHOLE THING ACT 1-3 AND I LIKE IT PLEASE WRITE A NEW CHAPTER.

(sigh) annother dead fic that... sucks ass well anyways it seems that the best big-o fics are dieing.

anyways i would be very happy if you continued beacuse people do read this... but whatever if you lazy then thats nice if your busy thats nice to

so

R.I.P

Matar Out

Great story! can't wait for next part!

Reminds me of Guillian-Barre Syndrome to a T. And besides occasional grammar errors and various typos, excellent writing style. Nice!

Gripping story very well written but will you please continue on with the story i'm dying to know what is goin on

Nice. I hope you plan on continuing this fic!

Oh My God! This is one of the most written story's Iv'e ever read. If you get this review, please update! You've done such a wonderful job. If I may make a suggestion or two, since Roger is "dying" it would be nice to know what his feelings are for Dorothy. (Yeah, tou can tell, I'm a RogerXDorothy fan... oh well, can't help it.) Anyway this is so good! Please continue!-!

Wow, this story is really great. Although, as mentioned earlier there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes. The only one I really noticed though was, get to and too mixed up. But that made the story no less enjoyable! PLease update soon!

Um, are you EVER gonna update this?

Wow... it's been a while since I've read a Big O story, but even so, I think this one is the best of all! It does have the feel of the tv show, and I love the plot. I really hopen you continue this!

This really is a great story. I know what you mean when you say that you wrote it "as an episode." It's exactly the type of fan fiction I was looking for.

Don't worry, the characters are almost perfectly in tune. Roger seems a bit excitable ("Wow!" doesn't really seem like a Roger phrase), but it still works.

While the story and the character representation are good, I can't ignore the flaws in presentation. You're grammar and spelling do leave a bit to be desired, and the lengthy Author's Notes seem to yank the reader's attention out of that well-crafted “Big O atmosphere” that you had just worked so hard to create. I would love to beta read for you if that would help, but in any case, you should know the difference between “lest” and “least.” For example... “The least you could do is give me the cure,” and, “Roger has to find the cure, lest he die.”

However, these errors are almost non-existent in your action scenes. In fact, I’d have to say that the fighting scenes are really very high quality. You seem to be in your element when describing a Big O battle. Normally, I would find these scenes tedious, but you really make them come alive.

I know that you said in you Author’s Bio that this story is second in priority, but I can’t wait to see the next chapter! You really are doing a great job- your stylistic approaches to this story are enviable. I look forward to an update!

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Wow, awesome story sofar. I'd definatly love to read more of it soon. Keep up the good work.

it's been a year since you wrote this, when are you going to update? plus it's good.

So far, I have just read chapter 1, but I hope to read the other two soon! I agree with one of the other reviewers that you should be more careful about your spelling, but the style of the fic is great, and everyone is in character. Keep up the good work! : )