That sucks I actually did really like it. I hope you do pick it up again one though!

Noooo, more please! I'm begging you D:

Can u update the next chapter please!

sounds really good so far. I hope you add more soon.

Very nice. When I got to the end I got sad because there wasn't another chapter. Anyway, I like the story so far. Update soon please. )

Great start.

Good grammar and sentence structure too (esp with the way you wrote what she was hearing from other people's heads) which is definitely a plus. :)

I can't wait to see where this goes so keep up the good work.