Cool story! I'm trying to look closely at how characters say their feelings in a story because I have an agsty fic about Ginny and I'm horrible with emotions. ugh. Can you R&R one of my stories?

This is really good! Keep up the good work, you are a great writer!

That was all so very powerful, but I can't put believable in. Draco's hard to write into fanfics because we've never seen him as anything but harsh. You did it well, but in my mind, Draco's always a deatheater.

Interesting...Interesting. I like it.

I've read through this one several times, It made me think. Would it be possible for DM to honestly question himself like this? (we all do at some point, don't we?). I don't quite picture him dropping his family pride, but a secret hatred is not impossible either. An interesting look at a character that we just decide is evil, you have added another dimension to Draco Malfoy. Interesting!