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This is so cute. This has to be the one thing I wanted see most in Ender's Game. The scene between them about salaam, I'm sure I read that part like 20 times over and over again cause I loved it so much. I give this 4 and a half stars. Probably cause it's the first I read. XD

I have just finished "Ender in exile" and came up here to read some more. This is the sweetest. Nice touch, I do want to read more about Alai. He is such an important part in Ender's life during Battle School. Anyway, thanks for writing this.

This is the first Ender/Alai story I've actually enjoyed! Normally I REALLY hate yaoi, but I liked this one.

Your English is much better than my Spanish. Besides a few awkward phrases, it was very readable. Good job!

Please update soon, this is a great story!

Jessica