 LaurenShort-DisneyFan 12/23/11 . chapter 1Wow! I gotta say this was a pretty good short story!
Gary(a.k.a. 21) is my favorite from the Venture series. It was refreshing to finally see a pretty realistic situation happen between him and someone like Triana. Plus, great writing style, and plot setup. A few gramatic errors here and there but who hasn't done that. Glad to see he finally got some love.
Probably didn't expect it to be her, but hey...as long as it worked out for the poor guy! |