I looooove it!

Thank you for writing this, I REALLY enjoyed reading it! Very much in character, yet at the same time, not. Great job!

there is a name for what you did in this chapter and it s called Edging! It was f#cking frustrating. You are an evil, evil, naughty person! You should be proud of yourself. Very well done!

this one was rather long but worth it. Very well written but a trifle can t see the forest for the trees kind of thing going on here. So...did they make it to see the mom? And I'm sorry...why did they spend TWO chapters kissing before Brian got around telling Justin his Mom was in hospital? I hope they keep the cat.

It took me the second chapter to really learn who is telling the story in the first chapter, lol! But wasnt the name of Ians cat in the series "Wolfgang von Eschenbach" ? LOOOOL but totally wonderful storyline, just wanted to leave a comment before heading on with the next chapter !

I can not figure out who is the one telling the story. Or is that the point?