This fic is amazing and you've only written one chapter. Your writing is impecable and I can't wait for more!

Please continue, this is good and I can tell it's going to get better. :)

I rather enjoyed this. Update soon?

It's so cute! I absolutely LOVE it when a story has parallelism in it! It's my favorite literary device! Can't wait for the update :)

Well, looks like I'm the lucky first-reviewer :)

So far, I'm intrigued by this fic. Your language is good, the story-line is promising and the characters seem very believable at this point. I'm looking forward to updates! Hopefully, they'll come soon :)

I really like how you've included all of the other characters in to it. Also I like how you've set it in their third year. Not many writers do that and just get straight to the main plot without a little bit of background of how they got there. Please update soon. It's very intrigueing.