It's very cool.

PLEASE UPDATE DX BTW I'M KRYSTEN

"He has the ability to fly and shoot energy beams out of his eyes and tail."

Actually Jetray can shoot lasers out of any part of his body. His eyes and tail are sumply the easiest to aim with. In one episode he fights a teenage heatblast and uses one of his toes to shoot a laser at it while shooting eye lasers at the same time. So Jetray can at least shoot 9 lasers at the same time (6 toes, 2 eyes, 1 tail).

HAH! I normally don't like fics that borrow qnother fic's plot, but this fic has better fight scenes. Nnoitra getiing head-butted, body slammed, and generally punished is this stories highlight, with Yammy being abused by U-humungusaur placing as a close second.

I gotta say, Kyle is noticably more brutal than Ben is in a fight.

Pretty good. You improved a lot of things I could have done better with my own story.

yay you chose stark because i was the only one who did a recommindation

As much as I like the story you're doing, I wish you'd keep working on Kyle 10: Alien Force. Sorry if I'm being mean. Anyway, good job.

Lol! Man, I love what you've done! Nice work that you've got going on. Come on, I want to see more of this. Keep it up!

make him starks fraccion instead of halibels because in the original she was chosen

I must your do an awesome job with your story. I really hope Kyle becaome friends with most of the fraccion. As for being who's fraccion I not sure because both Starrk and Harribel are nice. I would let you chose. Also my favorite arrancar are Ggio, Findor, Dordoni, Cirucci, Shawlong, Yylfordt, Aaroniero, and Rudobon.