Reviews for Promise
Softballa13tondalayo 4/29/13 . chapter 28
Oh sweet Jesus my respect for you has skyrocketed! Yes! Australia is doing it right, I swear, I know Americans don't really give your country too much credit, and as an intellectual and not an American I must congratulate you. Really, the US could learn a thing or two about going about social issues and separating individual life choices from the law.

You have no idea how incredibly happy your end comment made me. Even though I'm a Christian Darwinist, i hold to the understanding that a person's choices are their own, and that forcing my ideologies on others is not doing anyone a favor. People suffer from different circumstances, and its not the place of strangers to tell them how to live their lives (so long as they don't harm other people, for example theft or rape or such.)
SKHT 4/5/13 . chapter 56
Oh man. I really wish I had gone and reviewed each chapter separately because there were so many things that I loved.
RobStar moments were great. I really think you nailed their characters. A lot of people make Dick out to be Prince Charming, but no. He is a prick. A mostly well intentioned prick, but still a prick. And then others make Starfire out to be a complete damsel in distress, and that's so annoying. She is a mother fucking warrior princess, and don't you forget it. So, really, excellent job on staying in character.
I loved the real life issues you put in here. Families, babies, marriage, death. I teared up a few times, especially in the last few chapters. Dick thinking he lost his baby was heart-wrenching, and so well written.
I loved Momma Catwoman. It was a short segment, but it was great.
I've read all your stories up to this, and it's obvious how much your writing has improved. Really, this is the best Teen Titans fic I've read.
I'm sad there isn't a sequel to this, but good authors know when to end a story, and I couldn't think of a better finish. Thank you so much for writing this, and now I'm going to read everything else you have! :)
SKHT 4/2/13 . chapter 14
I HATE Tarantula. Hate her. Hope something bad happens to her.
Msdrock26 3/4/13 . chapter 56
On your Promise extras can we have a wedding scene? I'd love to read about their wedding!
Chronos guardian 2/23/13 . chapter 56
Damn you touch my heart! Once I start reading your stories I can never stop. I have homework piled up and you know what I think this read was totally worth it. I love Jason and wish he'd been part of the ending but you know what I understand the reasons why not. Dude needs to figure himself out before he can reconnect with family. Now this is an ending I can live comfortably with. This is what DC should have done, the wankers.
blueberrrykisses 2/12/13 . chapter 9
"I can't buy you princedom," Bruce scolded, readjusting himself on his chair. "And that wasn't nice."
LOL!
Love reading your stories. They actually make me laugh out loud. I wanna say it's been a good month and I'm still trying to catch up, just for the sake of being caught up.
JesFriendMagnet 2/6/13 . chapter 56
For weeks, I've been meaning to send a heartfelt review to this fic. I'm sorry I didn't get to do so any sooner!

This series might be my favorite on all of . I absolutely loved everything about it.

First of all, Touch:
What a wonderful way to begin a three-part series! You beautifully captured the Titans in their younger ages; felt extremely canon and in-character. The naivety was really satisfying to read. And I'm super partial to being able to read a budding, blossoming relationship. (Because I can't help but feel that it's somehow unsatisfying to jump right into a story where two characters are older or together when they weren't in the canon series.) So being able to read Rob and Star's relationship in its beginning and progression was extremely fulfilling for me on a personal level! I often find that the best and most talented authors are able to take something canon and young - such as the Rob/Star relationship - and harness it, molding it and growing with it and can make it entirely their own. You've definitely done that in this fic. Plus, you captured Robin on a level that I hardly see done in fanfiction. I love being able to see (/read) his character flaws and love him nonetheless. Too often I see uncharacteristically perfect Dick Graysons in fics (and similarly, too uncharacteristically cold or stoic). Being able to embrace his flaws and relate to him AND watch him grow through them was fantastic. {And of course, Star's POV was unique and fulfilling to read! I think you captured her emotions and grace so, so fittingly.}

Masks:
Loved how you portrayed the death of innocence (sorry to be cliche!) in this fic. Lots of character development and progression. I found myself for the first time truly shipping Red X/Star in the depths of my mind for a while, too, so it was great for him to turn out to be the Boy Wonder I love so much. Also, I loved the introduction of the Bat Clan into this fic! Alfred was written so gracefully and lovingly that I don't even think I can express in words how lovely it was for me to read his parts. :) And I commend you on the way you incorporate comic lore into the hearts of your stories and still manage to make it your own and unique. It's very satisfying! And even moreso, I loved the realistic approach you went with on showing the first time Dick and Starfire made love. Everything was fittingly in-character and Star's POV was once again superb.

Promise:
Was so confused when Starfire didn't appear in the first few chaps of this fic! And I misread in the first chapter that Can was Dick's lover or something. I was admittedly crushed, haha, and I've never found myself to be a die-hard Rob/Star fan until reading this series. (So look at that! You've noticeably made me love them more.) Loved the original characters, loved the new setting, and loved the way you showed the adult progression in the Night/Star relationship. There were more than a handful of instances where I found myself reading this fic late at night and told myself, "I'll stop after this chapter" and couldn't help but disobey myself! I was at the edge of my seat (or, errr, bed) multiple times; when the Psions captured the girls being the most notable one. I literally could not allow myself to sleep until I knew that they'd both be okay. (Because now I've come to know that you are evil and may very well kill off a loved character! Hehh.) Dick's perspective was REALLY FUCKING FANTASTIC to read. I apologize for the cursing, but it was absolutely necessary. You write his POV terrifyingly and satisfyingly well. :) Loved being able to see such a well-written Cy/Sarah relationship, as well. You made her character so lovable, and it felt so fitting to have the Titans accept her into their little family. The little drabble about Starfire learning of human male reproductive organs made me chuckle aloud and wake my roommate up, so thanks for that! Being able to seamlessly incorporate humorous and blissful moments into such a tragedy-filled and adult-themed story really proves to me how talented of an author you are. (Also, I feel the need to mention that Pregnant Raven might be my favorite person in the series.)

I really was satisfied with each of these fics more than words could ever describe. Each ending satiated my thirst for quality conclusions, every single character was portrayed really well and fittingly, and every scene was beautifully written. You've really done a marvelous job with this series. :)

I'll undoubtedly continue to read the remainder of your fics. I've really fallen in love with your writing style! I'd even be interested in reading some of your [real-life] novels. Your writing has truly worked its way into my heart. :')

Thanks again for constructing such a lovely three-part series!
Jessica
jenny868 1/25/13 . chapter 1
amazed, you are good
Guest 1/21/13 . chapter 3
Is that young justice robin/nightwing and kid flash from young justice
Vylette Satine 1/11/13 . chapter 56
OMG! I haven't had the chance to read this! OMG! OMG! So sorry took me a while to read this, Kry. Almost a year in fact. Sidetracked. Got into online gaming and travelling. _ I'm readin' all your new stuff starting this week, New Year's Rez. LOL.

BUT OMG! I cried, laughed, gasped, cursed, ETC! It was... OMG! _

OMG, TIM TIM getting hurt, having an alter, alter ego! OMG, Ryan'dr trying to impress his wife! OMG, Star getting kidnapped, getting pregnant! OMG, GARTH! (Sorry, can't exclude my yummy Tempest! :P) OMG, Mar'i!

OMG! SILKIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! SILKIE! SILKIEEEEEEEEEEEEE! O.o

And...

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG GGGGG! JASON! RED HOOD! I REMEMBER CALLING IT WHEN YOU KILLED HIM OFF IN MASKS! "UNDER THE RED HOOD" LINES AND ETC! THE "I'M STILL YOUR BROTHER" LINE GOT ME ALL WARM INSIDE AND CRYING!

Sorry, caps lock button broke. :P I really need to sleep now, it's 4:41AM here. But I couldn't stop reading. O.o

I gotta ask though, before moving on to another fic, is Jason going to be in the fics you wrote after this?

Vy
Guest 12/27/12 . chapter 55
Im sorry but this story dont make sense
amppet22 12/26/12 . chapter 1
Hey I just wanted to say I LOVE your work! I've read all of your stories in the 'Touch' series-I'm currently reading 'Promise' and got to chapter 38- Now I know I can't ask you to rewrite the wonderful series that you've created, It crossed my mind. But I understand that's hard to do. I was just wondering if you had the time to write stories about when Starfire and Dick just got together. As in right after 'Touch' but before 'Masks'. Its just an idea and you don't have to follow up with it. But if you have any spare time and it crosses you're mind I would love to read it!
As always your an amazing writer! Keep typing!
BiblioMatsuri 11/4/12 . chapter 56
*claps*
BiblioMatsuri 11/4/12 . chapter 55
*applauds* Awkward moments, pain and suffering and loyalty and last-minute saves - very good story.
Robinxstarfirelu 10/30/12 . chapter 56
Omg! So cute! I was so thinking Tim was gonna die :( I am glad he didn't! Love your stories. So realistic and funny :) I love em. The boys make me laugh so hard. Oh Wally. Lol ass man... Rofl rofl keep writing :)
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