i like it more than your other...
I like your story, your style, its really good to read.
But, what i dont like: Its apparently a OS :(
The end is just, well must laugh.
He Kiss her, and then walks of like a Boss :D
Great piece of work!
Maybe there will be a sequel? A little

I just thought, that it would be interesting to know how it goes on, what will happen next, in your idea...
I watched Die Hard just a hour ago, and decided the German is quite weird there and not right, literally (im from Germany)
I love it to read your Story, and somehow

Wow, just wow. This was amazing! i could picture it all playing out in my head. I just saw Die Hard for the first time yesterday and i'm a huge fan of Alan Rickman so i loced Hans Gruber. I loved this story, you should make another if you can. The writing style is amazing and clear and Hans stayed in character the whole time. I also loved your OC. Please make another one!

Rather nicely done and I enjoyed. Hans is so yummy! :)

I recently saw the Die Hard movie and fell in love with Hans Gruber. This is the first story I have read with him in it. And I must say that you have set the bar very high for the rest of the stories I may read. I really enjoyed reading it. I laughed toward the end...