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| Reviews for Warrior |
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  playboi 9/3/12 . chapter 28 Continue the story please |
| Rachel Chandler 8/30/12 . chapter 27 PLEASE MAKE INTO A SQEUAL! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I BEG YOU! THIS STORY IS SOP GOOD I HAVE READ IT ABOUT 20 TIMES OVER AND OVER IT'S SO GOOD PLEASE |
 Ms. AJ Ninja 7/29/12 . chapter 28Good plot. But you really need beta... really bad. Even if you don't know how to spell it, look it online or something. |
| Abbi-Rose 6/16/12 . chapter 28 pretty good so far, cant wait for an update? |
| SaveMe2017 6/16/12 . chapter 27 I really like this story but it's poorly developed. You really should have a beta and I would suggest a rewrite to make it better and not have things all jumbled up. I still really like the story though! |
| Alice Uzumaki 5/31/12 . chapter 2 This is a good beginning for the story. Volturi is spell correctly but I must tell you that Jasper's last name is not. It's Whitlock. Other than that I have no complaints since it's so good (especially in plot and detail. There are some typos, but I can tell what you mean. Though one question: why italics? |
| booksxforxlife 5/28/12 . chapter 26 I thought bella was going to have a baby? |
| booksxforxlife 5/28/12 . chapter 2 You spelled Emmett correctly:) Esme Platt and Jasper Whitlock. |
| natashar 3/20/12 . chapter 25 cant wait for more |
| Cassie McCarty 1/24/12 . chapter 21 You just triggered my inner gag reflex. But great story! Please, do continue it! |
| Lionnara 12/26/11 . chapter 24 nice more :P.. |
| Lionnara 12/20/11 . chapter 23 nice what happend next |
| lolCXjk 9/26/11 . chapter 1 I LUV YOU TONYA! UR MAH BESTEST FRAND! I HOPE I CAN COME VISIT YOU AGAIN SOON! |
| denali1918 9/11/11 . chapter 18 cry it to short and she stink boring now give us some action please please please one month and she done nothing but keep rose kid from being crushed and eat and sleep and jog that so boring real some had some majer writers block or school got in the way |
| Blair.Alice. CullenLuvr 8/24/11 . chapter 16 nice update |
