every human keets at least 10 years and spike gets nothing...
i wish buffy would have understood that spike was a monster that did some good...i with raily would have kill him and showed buffy what spike did... and maybe save a few lives

It's always nice to know that someone's read a story of yours even if it's seven years old. There aren't enough Miller stories out there and I enjoyed that Gray is still watching Riley's back. Still putting Riley's needs ahead of what he wants.

Both Miller and Finn struck me as more violent with Randall than was in character but then, as a former friend who'd turned rogue, Randall couldn't have expected much better treatment given what he was doing.

I haven't even seen "As You Were" yet (I suck like that), but I have read a quick sum up for it, and must say, I really enjoyed this. It felt sort of choppy to me while reading it, but it was well written, and I liked it. Anyone ever told you you write too much Riley? :)

This is a nice piece, with a good balance of action and character development. I found the characterization of Graham quite believable, and Riley and Sam had some very good off-camera dialogue. Solid plot, too, especially given that it had to be woven around the existing story.

All these alternate "AYW"'s are making me mad at ME. How could have the real AYW have been so bad and horribly depressing! Anyway, Urban Warfare was excellent.

I've spent 6 days trying to read this - everytime I started I got interrupted. But, I finally finished, and I've got to say...

You are my absolute favorite. I love what you do with these characters. You make these seamless entries into canon that just make me fall in love with everyone, all over again.

There was something about Ethan's line "Alright, maybe you can." that fit so right. Although your writing always transforms into scenes playing out in my mind, this particular line was especially right.

I can't wait to see your next story. Keep up the good work.

well at least Spike was only trying to help Buffy, though I still don't believe he was the doctor, it just ain't his kind of deal

Great story! You really captured Riley and Graham's voices perfectly, and made Riley much more realistic in his not-quite-over-Buffy-ness. And you made Sam a lot more sympathetic than she actually was on air. Thanks for bringing back my favorite commandos!

I just love the way you fill in the blanks. Also, until you reminded me I'd totally forgotten about that certian English warlock in Initiative custody. Great story. Clever.

Fantastic! I really loved this. Showing another side of the episode, when we all know the other side, was a terrific idea. Can't tell you how jazzed I was to see Ethan Rayne had his sticky little fingers in the pie--Ethan's always fun. Your characterization of Graham was great, too, and I loved the scenes between him and Sam. Terrific job!